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.:Hypocrite:. by ~Suchieideru:iconSuchieideru:

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Go ahead and
Point and laugh and cry
Everything you said
Was all a lie

It is so much
Easier to see
What isn’t wrong with you
Is everything that’s wrong with me

We have sat
Friends together for so long
For years you leaned on me
For you I stayed strong

Blind I was
I never saw
Ocean tides surrounding
Fire and its deadly jaw

Numb I was
I never felt
That knife you drove in
My back to the hilt

Everything you did you
Swear was for my sake
Everything I believed was
So very fake

All your promises
Lost, never found
All your lies had been
My only ground

For you I gave
My heart a solemn vow
To follow you in silence
Wherever you would go

To always catch
You when you fell
To have your Heaven I will
Die in Hell

To become your shield and
Your ladder to climb
I never knew you
Planned on leaving me behind

Do I really need to
Say it to make it plain
To tell you I finally
Know the nature of this game

Am I so far
Away so out of sight
Did you forget who carried
You through the night
How was I to know when
I gave you my only light
No more a friend I’d see but just
A hypocrite
©2008-2009 ~Suchieideru
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Submitted: May 15, 2008
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I'm hesitant to submit this because poetry is not my strong point... AT ALL. Along with song writing = . = But I did anyway... I've written many "poems", I just never show them to anyone. My English Literature book is what influences me to write poetry.

Anyway, a lot of people ask me if this is based on someone. Well... yes and no. It's a collection of people who have acted like hypocrites to me through my lifetime. So, no. It's not based on one person.

And if you don't like how it's written then TOUGH. I find this style easier to write in. Not sure what it's called so hopefully this is good enough.

Hypocrite © MAS

EDIT: Just so people know, this has NOTHING to do with my ex-boyfriend.
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=michael92:iconmichael92: May 16, 2008, 11:10:11 AM
Very nice and poetic!

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16 year-old amateur graphic/ web designer
~Suchieideru:iconSuchieideru: May 16, 2008, 8:03:27 PM
Thank you so much Michael!! :hug: :)
=michael92:iconmichael92: May 17, 2008, 12:24:29 AM
You are welcome :)

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16 year-old amateur graphic/ web designer
~Elfnip:iconElfnip: May 17, 2008, 5:38:29 PM
Very nice, I could almost hear a song coming from the lyrics; are you putting this to music?

Hypocrites have a special place in Hell.

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I am both blessed and cursed to be an artist.
~Suchieideru:iconSuchieideru: May 24, 2008, 4:05:47 PM
Thank you very much :D :D And I can certainly try 8D I'm not too good with that sort of thing but it'd be fun to try again :)

Indeed they do.
~GingerSpice019:iconGingerSpice019: May 29, 2008, 7:07:53 PM
omg this is awesome! seriously, I love it.

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...which roughly translates to I want to get into your underpants. :eyes:
~Suchieideru:iconSuchieideru: May 30, 2008, 1:14:52 PM
Thank you so much!! :D
~GingerSpice019:iconGingerSpice019: May 30, 2008, 2:27:09 PM
welcome!

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...which roughly translates to I want to get into your underpants. :eyes:
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